Kafkaescence

aw, damn it. i was reviewing this as a short story. i didn't see that it was meant to be a prologue. well, i doubt many of my critiques still ...

Thanks, again. I appreciate it.

Thanks for the comment. Still a draft, so hopefully things'll get smoothed out by the time I finalize it. Are there any specific examples of bulkiness you could bring up ...

I'll get to chapter two either later tonight or tomorrow.

I guess this is what happens when I read The Sound and the Fury while revising my novel, ahaha. But thank you. I can't say I wasn't going for at ...

No problem, I enjoyed it. Hit me up if you ever need anything else reviewed, okay?

Okay, thanks for taking the time to reply. Makes more sense now. Maybe you could incorporate these into this chapter to make things easier to understand the first read? Yeah. ...

Ah, good.

Also, a quote from my original review that I assume you must have missed: "I gather that it had something to do with his/her mother (should I be surprised?), hence ...

*is contradictory

1. I did not call your piece lazy. I called one sentence in it lazy. 2. You misquoted yourself. You implied in your reply that the pipe had been previously ...

I can't even read this.

Ah, but I don't want it interpreted as poetry! Perhaps "poem" isn't the ideal label; would "minimalistic style" be more satisfying?

Thank you! It'd take an enormous ego to respond to all of your points, as you list quite a bit, and a few very good ones. As it is, I ...

First, thank you for the review. I appreciate that you took the time to read this through and to comment. Secondly, I'd like to respond to your first point regarding ...