Kafkaescence

I thought this looked interesting, so I read through it, and I think I have some comments for you to consider. As this is a 150 word contest, you are ...

Alright. Here I am. It seems like I can never get to your works within any decent amount of time, and I apologize about that. My summer is pretty much ...

There's a reason the formatting of this piece looks strange, and it's not (at least, I don't think it is) because of the Word Document to YWS transfer. Actually, it's ...

A dark force Not enough. Metaphorical dark, or literal dark? What kind of force? splattered the walls with gore. Elongated white remains Are these human remains? This would explain the ...

There are a few ways one could look at this story. From a literal perspective, this is but a tragedy that took a detour. Towards the beginning, the reader sees ...

I'm back again. I sure hope there's no rush to this. ;) First, nitpicks. Living with Harry was like nothing I’d ever experienced before. His direct approach to life was ...

First, nitpicks. I was awoken the next morning as the noise thundered through the little shop, shaking the floors. Could be much more effective. Rework this so that the reader ...

I have absolutely no idea about the extent to which this short story is true, but for the purpose of this review, let's assume it's fictitious. Love can be split ...

Sorry it's taken me this long. My review is mainly going to be spent focusing on nitpicks, because this chapter is simply littered with grammatical mistakes and inane contradictions. When ...

Hullo! Didn't I say I would come? I've always admired your ability to develop characters. This is evident in pretty much everything that I've read of yours, and this is ...

Er, I'm late. Oh well. Snoink and Skins both brought it up already, so this critique won't sound at all new to you, but the laptop thing kind of bugged ...

Here I am, finally. Before we move on to the juice of the review, there're a few little nitpicks I'd like to point out. Crooks never repainted the fucking floors, ...

Ah, finally got to this. Not so much to critique here. I like the fact that you decided to move on with the story at this point instead of continuing ...

Chapter four. Man, I really need to speed things up a bit. What is it you were trying to accomplish by adding this chapter? What do you feel this chapter ...

I'm back! I really enjoyed this. In contrast with the last chapter, it seemed your dialog, both internal and external, was much more Middle-English sounding. One cannot say that a ...