Kadie

This is a little hard to interprete for me, poetry isn't my thing, but this makes me thing of the so called 'gangsta's', who walk around calling themselves 'playa's'. 'with ...

I'm not sure i agree with the other reviews. Yes, his transition from 'in love' to 'killer' was maybe a little fast, but at the end of the day, he's ...

I agree with Amelia. I think you need to slow things down a little and describe them in much more detail. Also, you should try not to have too many ...

Call me sadistic, but i just couldn't help but find it funny how his day was just getting worse and worse. Josh sure is tough, if it was me, i ...