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Wow, this is interesting and very morbid (at least to me), but I like morbid poetry. Good job, I liked the hint of sarcasm in the teller's voice. Favorite Part: ...

So I've gathered, Tatra.

Thanks, I agree now looking back on this poem that the "By the time I" stnazas are pretty much unneeded.... is this better? First it was an inkling; a spark; ...

First it was an inkling; a spark; a fleeting dream. Then it was a possibility; a hungry flame; an excited thought. It became Real; a roaring fire; a future. And ...

Great poem, my thoughts exactly. I loved the last little bit: Can’t create; Inspiration is gone. because sometimes there isn't any inspiration.

Wow, that was very deep, and well thought. I beleive Audy summed up everything I was wondering, except: I remember that. I personally would have just written "I remember" or ...

haha, thanks for the gift niteowl, it's hilarisou.

yes, yes, I noticed this right after I posted this... There's enough room to crop the picture, though, so it's not too much of a problem.... The telephone wires and ...

Thanks, I like your name too. Yeah, I hope my writing will improve. See, this one site I used to go to was not very critique-ey and that's definitely not ...

Last January, it snowed (which never happened in Mississippi) and I happened to have my camera on me. One click and bam, this picture was born.

Hi, I'm another Kaatiie... I'm looking forward to reading your stuff!

Thanks, all, I'm sure I'll figure everyone's names out at least... I did forget, though, to inform you guys that I also love photography and that's where most of my ...

I agree. I love haikus, they're my absolute favorite (well, besides freeform) but this one is kind of hard to make sense of. Keep trying!

ha, thanks, I'll be sure to behave and read the rules and whatnot. i look forward to being here. It's taken me forever to find a good writing website.

granted, volant, but you can never use your new skills to write anything worth reading. I wish seagulls were blue.