KaatiieBugg

This was a fairly good poem, but all the commas just really got on my nerves. That's probably just me, though, so no worries, right? Anyways, I liked this poem ...

This was definatly interesting, very... er... bouncy? anyways, I liked the rhyming, but a couple lines seemed a bit forced, what if all my hearts desires turn out to be ...

thanks! yes, that's exactly what I meant jas.

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

Summer camp arrives Stealing away those I love Leaving me alone With nothing to do Except for summer camp To finally end.

I agree, this could be a good poem, but right now it's all over the place and there isn't any punctuation at all. Maybe a tad bit more work, creating ...

Once upon a time, someone died.

I remember that the first story I ever wrote was in like first grade, on that paper that's split in half. The bottom has lines for writing and the top ...

OH! You like Warriors? Yay! I absolutely love the series and erin hunter, she's just great!! This sounds interesting, I like the new Clan names and I can't wait to ...

Hey, this was pretty good! mateeah, the part of a car you sit in is considered a cabin, I beleive, at least with pick-up trucks it is... Keep it up!

Welcome Nerura! I'm pretty new too, but we've got alot in common. It's funny though, I've never been able to write a fanfiction.... Hope you get to enjoy it here, ...

This was a good poem, short and to the point, I guess.. I liked how you compared it to music. good job! -Buggs

Wonderful job! *claps* Other than what Paw already mentioned, nothing really caught my eye as being a typo or something. I liked the flashback, and how you used that. Great ...

“I’m called Hawkins,” the boy said. “Yes, well, why is that? Is it your last name, first name, what?” asked the shopkeeper, slightly annoyed at his new employee. The shopkeeper ...

This is an awesome poem. Now that I know what overdraft is, I mean. The rhythm of the poem was wonderful, I liked the rhyming because it added tons to ...