KaatiieBugg

I hate writing on paper. I can usually write anywhere that there's no people, and with music playing. otherwise, I just can't write.

I rarely swear in real life, and when I do it's when I am extremely frustrated at someone or something. I really try not to, because I have a younger ...

This was simply wonderful, it made me laugh. I love how you made the "evil stepsisters" not so evil, and how it was Cinderella who turns out to be sneaky ...

This was very well written. It's got me wanting to know what happened, and what will happen.... It is very short though, and you could probably lengthen it a bit ...

granted, but your newfound bigger vocabulary is in an ancient native american language no one speaks. i wish i wasn't so bored.

thanks alot, i can totally see what you're saying. i've written alot of poems, but very few are all that good. so thanks again for the critique.

i had a very weird dream last night about vampire nuns chasing me along a deserted dirt road in the middle of a wheat field. I was driving a recliner... ...

I have trouble with both fantasy and romance. With fantasy, I guess I'm just not original enough, because every time I think I've got a really great idea, I happen ...

This was preeetty good... I'm not sure if Aumi is a boy or girl, so that needs to be cleared up. Your descriptions were pretty good, I liked the clear ...

Wow, your first poem? It was pretty good for the first one you've written! Anyways, I think it's kind of vague... If you maybe made the ending a tad bit ...

thanks everybody... someone asked if that was the first time I'd seen snow, and no, it wasn't! I really love snow and I lived somewhere snowy when i was a ...

Overall I liked it. There were a couple of grammatical errors, such as in the first line, it should be Poet's, not Poets. I likedd the imagery. and the language ...

I loved this poem. Beautiful words, beautiful. It IS a simple poem like Nolan said, but it is still a great poem. Favorite part: Closed bluebells, holding morning’s promise. this ...

yeah, I know haikus are supposedly supposed to 'connect with nature' but this IS an experiment, just to use a different form of poetry. But anyways, thanks for the review ...

I loved this poem. It was great, and I definately think it is whimsical. I love the imagery and meaning of the poem, and the greatness of it. rofl... Anyways, ...