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  • Give me your piece and I will review for story, plot development, symbolism, characters, etc. But, in exchange, I will overlook grammar, spelling, and punctuation, unless I can fix it ...

    Mar 8, 2011


  • Thanks ever so much :]

    Mar 7, 2011


  • Fortunately, the part damaged was only from the waist up. Though blinded and profusely bleeding, on you run!

    Mar 6, 2011


  • Scene hair cut that is flat ironed all though naturally already pretty flat, and a dark, dark brunette. You are average height, brownish hazel eyes, you might wear contacts, but ...

    Mar 6, 2011


  • 10/10 = Fact.

    Mar 6, 2011

  • Randomosity
    Re: What if...

    I'd start dancing the Thriller with him, and then fall over, foaming at the mouth because I only imagined that during another one of those pesky contextual epileptic seizures I ...

    Mar 6, 2011

  • Narrative Poetry
    Re: "Do You love?"

    Write moody poetry and drink black coffee while wearing thick black lipstick on lips that never plan to kiss; I'd rather admire the stains of pucker on the rim of ...

    Mar 6, 2011


  • Thanks for the review :) Yea, the title is messy, but I feel like the messiness adds to the feeling that though this poem is about love-It's not perfect love. ...

    Mar 6, 2011


  • ( Diner booth, red seats, coffee for me, sleep for you, I'd talk and you'd nod ) . I'd . sing . you . love . songs . . you'd ...

    Mar 6, 2011


  • Ohm, this looks like it had originally been formatted but now is not. You may want to put those line breaks back in so it will read like a poem ...

    Mar 6, 2011


  • Banned for getting the avatar when I don't...

    Mar 6, 2011


  • Fortunately, as a Freak of Nature, you fall under "FREAKS OF NATURE: KENYAN". Discovered by Darwin while traveling in Africa, you have the ability to run the speed of Speed. ...

    Mar 6, 2011

  • Randomosity
    Re: Corrupt a Wish 2

    Wish granted, but the only control you will have is when you enter it, and it will raise 20 degrees, because you are just that hot. Aww yeaaa. I wish ...

    Mar 6, 2011


  • Friends telephone good whilst pizza.

    Mar 6, 2011

  • Lyric Poetry
    Re: Long Lost Feeling

    "in a long long while," Comma between long and long. Use commas to show you are listing something. I get the feeling of those memories Indescribable it is, "I get ...

    Mar 6, 2011


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