Young Writers Society

Give me your piece and I will review for story, plot development, symbolism, characters, etc. But, in exchange, I will overlook grammar, spelling, and punctuation, unless I can fix it ...

Thanks ever so much :]

Fortunately, the part damaged was only from the waist up. Though blinded and profusely bleeding, on you run!

Scene hair cut that is flat ironed all though naturally already pretty flat, and a dark, dark brunette. You are average height, brownish hazel eyes, you might wear contacts, but ...

10/10 = Fact.

I'd start dancing the Thriller with him, and then fall over, foaming at the mouth because I only imagined that during another one of those pesky contextual epileptic seizures I ...

Write moody poetry and drink black coffee while wearing thick black lipstick on lips that never plan to kiss; I'd rather admire the stains of pucker on the rim of ...

Thanks for the review :) Yea, the title is messy, but I feel like the messiness adds to the feeling that though this poem is about love-It's not perfect love. ...

( Diner booth, red seats, coffee for me, sleep for you, I'd talk and you'd nod ) . I'd . sing . you . love . songs . . you'd ...

Ohm, this looks like it had originally been formatted but now is not. You may want to put those line breaks back in so it will read like a poem ...

Banned for getting the avatar when I don't...

Fortunately, as a Freak of Nature, you fall under "FREAKS OF NATURE: KENYAN". Discovered by Darwin while traveling in Africa, you have the ability to run the speed of Speed. ...

Wish granted, but the only control you will have is when you enter it, and it will raise 20 degrees, because you are just that hot. Aww yeaaa. I wish ...

Friends telephone good whilst pizza.

"in a long long while," Comma between long and long. Use commas to show you are listing something. I get the feeling of those memories Indescribable it is, "I get ...