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Re: From the Thunder - 1.1 (Edited 12/15)
EDITED Let me know if the grammar is better :)
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: The Tears
Hello, KJ. At first I have to admit I didn't find the poem very interesting. It had some nice imagery from the beginning, but it seemed to be like so ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Because - Chap. 32 & 33
Hey, this is a quickie review (sorry, I'll try my best to do a better one later). I just wanted you to know I'm still reading and loving every bit ...
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 10
This is the best story ever!! Keep writing!! I love it!!! :elephant: Thanks :) New chapter is up.
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Because - Chap. 32 & 33
Hey KJ! :) I'm so glad you're posting more of this, because I read chapter one ... and, well, HAD to read the whole thing. Your style of writing is ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: The Endurance - Chap. 2
Thanks :) And you said "almost" perfect imagery. What can I do to improve it?? Always looking for constuctive critisism!
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: Shadows of Eternity - Chap. 2
Thanks for the review, EmmaJane. A lot of good pointers. You're awesome!
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: The Yellow-Purple Picture
Thanks everyone! You've given me much food for thought, and I will go now to edit away before class starts!
Sep 10, 2009 -
Re: Fetus (1)
You got the wrong end of the stick KJ, the woman isn't going to die. Her baby died inside her and she has to deliver it still born. Thanks for ...
Sep 9, 2009 -
Re: The Mortal Instruments Trilogy
These books ARE pretty awesome. I love the fact that you-know-who-and-who end up together. I was worried for a while there. Anyway, really excited for her next series! Gah!
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: The Luxe- Anna Godbersen
Actually, I didn't really enjoy these books. I found them dull and predictable. Is that too harsh? But really, as I was reading I was like, "Oh, this is going ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Into the Depths - Prologue
Hmmm. I like it. This could be neat in a book, all decked out like a ancient newspaper. I'm excited to see where you go with this. Keep posting.
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: Deleted
I just wanted to thank you guys. All of you. Your encouragement just really makes the writing worthwhile. And I'll definitely keep going with this. Thanks again, Angel of Death, ...
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: Leather and Lace - Chapter One
I know I already reviewed, but I had to point something out that the previous reviewer stated: “Right. You’re what, 9 or 10? You’re a big girl now?” he questions ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 1
Whew. Edited as of 6-22-09. It's been so long since I've worked on this; I'm really excited to get back into the plot. Hope you guys enjoy the rewrite. I ...
Jun 23, 2009