KBrowlingmeyerFAN

This was really good. You really got the point through that there was some definite tension, and dislike, between Emily and her mother. Everyone already picked out the little things ...

Your writing style reminds me of a girl I help at school with her writing for language. Emotions and looks are detailed, the scenery is depicted, but there is a ...

Did someone say Twilight? *twitch 'cullen' twitch* lol jk I really liked your prologue. It flowed together really smoothly and captured my interest. It makes me wonder what she did ...

Wow, this was really good. Ignore the people saying it was cheesy. I know many girls say the exact same thing, trust me my friends do every single time. Can't ...

I really liked this part. The pace was really fast, maybe just down a few notches, but it really caught the state of her emotions. This part was really quick ...

OMFG! This was so hysterical! I'm laughing so hard, I think I'm crying... scratch that: I AM crying! You are a genius! I love it when the stories are twisted ...

I also enjoyed this chapter. I do see his points though. True, it was rushed, and maybe could use some more detailing here and there on the characters, maybe even ...

This was a really good chapter. Except for the few typos and the rushed unclarity of some of her actions, I really enjoyed reading it. Like wisemann210 said, character development ...

I really enjoyed reading chapter one. You start describing the setting at one point, but then quickly stop and seem to focus in on the dialogue. But, so far, the ...