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Re: The Quest for Fire - Touch the Sky - Chapter Twelve
Here's a tad bit of feedback :) "Zoltar glanced at Felistia, his heart thumping in his chest." I sure hope his heart is in his chest! You may want to ...
Nov 14, 2020 -
Re: Silence
Oh my gosh i love it. so. much. It just got better and better! Here are a few things I noticed, please remember this is just my personal opinion :)) ...
Nov 9, 2020