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Re: What Do They Know (First Sec)
It was really short for a first section. You need to make it much longer at least four more paragraphs so readers can get an idea of weather they want ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: wounded (please comment) this will be countinuing
This was really good I really liked it! I have theories about what James could be. I think he is some kind of super human so to speak. Like he ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: Whatya Want From Me
This was a good story but there where a couple error I caught. "I'm tired of this game your playin', I'm tired of this friends with benefits. "Your messin' with ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Words Will Always Hurt You
This was a really good story!! :mrgreen: I think you should add more detail on how she feels, does he want to run down and stop the fighting? Can she? ...
May 6, 2010