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Re: Dark Fey
I'll be a mortal girl! - Justis (:
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Peanut Butter Banana Sandwiches
This was funny, and cute. I liked it. Skin already got I think most of the stuff I was looking at. Incorrect things. I think. “Would you stop!” Amber glared ...
May 3, 2010 -
Re: Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes ~ Her
This was amazing; again. I loved it and it flowed with the first part. I didn't find any errors while reading it so, nothing really negative to say. I'm jealous!(: ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Saved on the Killer Mountain- Chapter One
I liked this. But...Peter sounds sorta like a whimp to be honest. Elijah on the other hand is this down in the dumps guy, with a happy go lucky friend. ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Stolen-Chapter One
First, this was very short. Check your punctuation, since it's a girl...you might want to put in more description. "They're not suppose to be home yet. You should put in ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: The Art of Love Chapter 1
I think I'm finished with the first chapter...have any suggestions feel free to tell me. Thanks for any reviews. Beep! Beep! Was what I heard that Monday morning when I ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: *Deleted*
Hey Isha! It's Justis here, from chat! I just so happened to stumble upon your story. I really liked this, the hole Lady Gaga part made me laugh. I agree ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: For the Love of God, Chapter 1
I really liked that. Love the discription you put in it. I can't wait to read chapter two! They you are presented with wings. Um, I think you ment to ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Door Hinges
Wow...this was truly amazing. I loved it! (: The way you wrote - typed - was pretty great. Your really good and I hope you continue writing. I loved the ...
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes ~ Him
I really like this, its truely Beautiful. Its kind of sad though. But I still liked it. You did a wonderful job. Don't stop. You should try and make oh ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: The Art of Love
I'm not finished yet. How do you like it? Before you read, this isn't suppose to be a short story...I was hoping for a longer one, so not all of ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Just... smile
This was very beautiful. I actually loved it. I love how you made that cloud so inspiring. Ha I liked how at the end, you decided not to take your ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: A Paragraph of the week.
Christmas Wish I always knew it was a dream of my older sisters to visit Italy, but I did not know how to get the money for her to do ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: The Harp
I like! I'm not very good at reviewing, ha ha. So that's all I got... :D
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: Darling, Drink
This was pretty amazing, the best poem I've heard!(: Keep up the good work!
Apr 16, 2010