JustisMarez

This was kind of depressing...but in a good way. I liked this. I only saw a few errors which Durrie already got. The my for me and spacing your paragraphs ...

Hm. I liked this chapter! I also like all the other ones too(: I loved the part with the pj's! That made me laugh! I remember you asking me about ...

Comments in red The next three months were about the same. There was a physical exam every Friday, and Peter and Elijah didn't miss a single one. Every time, there ...

Character Profile: Name: Mia Gender: Female Age: 15 Description/picture: Likes: Friends, music, flying, driving, running. Dislikes: Snobs, cheaters, liars, rude people. Skills: Run fast. History: Pare

Wow. Your camera is better than mine...XD Those flowers are so pretty. Are they Iris's? I'm not positive. I've never reviewed a photograph so I'm not sure how. You camera ...

On the second floor, Peter waited outside of a small office. Suddenly, a large man with broad shoulder s , and a rough face, opened the office door and looked ...

I sat there and listened to my dog slobber over a chip I had given her. In the other room, I could hear my parents fighting like cats ‘n’ dogs. ...

When Josh and I arrived at my house, we made sure that stranger wasn’t following us again. Then we went inside, got Ralfeo, and locked the house up. No one ...

An eleven year old schizofranic? Nice. I liked the ending. Dear World, you cradled me in your arms for 11 years, never warning me of the troubles you would give ...

This was pretty good. I liked it. About the whole lantern, cellphone dill...you should probably make the lantern a flash light? Then again why would someone be carring a flash ...

Lol. I liked this. It was funny. Comments in red "Pete r , are you okay?" Peter, holding his hand on his forehead and his head drooped said quietly, "Yeah." ...

This is my first shot at poetry. I was visiting my cousin who is always grounded, like everyday. And this came up. I just wanted to post it seeing if ...

She's a human. Name: Mia Age: 15 Appearance: Black hair down to the middle of her back. (Skin) Pale. (Body type) Skinny, and short. Hobbies: Writing, drawing, and dancing. Likes: ...

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I really liked this. Like Isha said, it was depressing but in a good way. It kind of reminds me that my older brother could be killed in Afganistan...not sure ...