JustisMarez

I liked this. It reminded me of a lot of 'Just friends' kids in my school, maybe even me and my friend. :P I think you should make this a ...

I really liked this, it was different than I've read or am used to reading. I'm not that into poetry but this was good. I like how you told it. ...

Am I the reason for your pain? Why do you put me through my own? You think I don’t care I’m dying inside and you don’t know I want to ...

This flows so good together, I love it. I can image someone singing it like ever so lightly. I like it. It's soothing in a wordy way. :P I like ...

Hey Ed. I haven't talked to you or seen your work in like a year now. Woahh. I saw this on the homepage and I figured I'd take a look. ...

Water floods my soul Pools lie in my sight Forces beyond me Hold back my cry for help. My lips quivering Not by coldness outside But by coldness I feel ...

I posted this because I need some help with where I'm going with this...but here you are! Vision blurred. The darkness is lurking around me, pulling me deeper, and the ...

Things that go through my head everyday. I wish he would just leave us alone. I wish my mom would actually be happy without him. I wish I would see ...

Is this a real poem or just telling us about you in a poemtic way? Lol but I did like it! I pretty much suck at writing love poems...well any ...

I was pourndering upon the lyric poetry and I found this...I liked it! Your really good at writing! I just recently started poetry, I'm trying to read up on it ...

Hmm...I liked this poem. It strikes my interest. The way its writen and the rhythem - as everyone above my post has already said. This is how I feel sometimes ...

Again...first time at this kind of writing so I'm not sure if it's good... I lay, in my room all alone And I say, to myself that there’s nothing wrong ...

First shot at this kind of writing so yeah... I don’t know what to do Cause I’m out of my mind I don’t know what to do with you. I ...

This is a first shot at this kind of writing so yeah... I don’t know what to do Cause I’m out of my mind I don’t know what to do ...

I really liked this! I have no idea how to review poetry though. All I know is that it caught my interest and I loved it. This poem was very ...