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I agree, it was very suspenseful! i loved it though and you did a wonderful with the details! and i am very glad that luke did survive! i was scared ...

I like this part too!! it's sweet how luke thinks of others before himself. i like that about him. you did a great job of characterizing them. i think you ...

I loved it meg! it's really well written and the descriptions are great. it painted a beautiful picture in my head. ok so about this information overload you mention, it's ...

Wow!! Meg, that is really good!! i love it! And i think the mane looks great, and the background, you can't even tell it was supposed to be gray because ...

I love that drawing!! it's absolutely positively BEAUTIFUL!! Such talent! i'm envious! Names... Names... sorry nothings coming to mind! But it's an excellent drawing! i hope you post more of ...

Oh my goodness meg!!! this poem was absolutely LOVELY!!! It was so well written and descriptive! The words you used were so... hmm what's the word i'm looking for? moving? ...

hey so i finally got around to writing you a response, since that seems like what you want =) haha ok well i really liked it! Just a few quick ...

OK everyone here's part of chapter three. I'm not quite sure about it so any advice is greatly appreciated! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Hey jada!! ok well i really liked it!! it was very descriptive and painted a beautiful picture in my mind. This was my favorite part: A page turned Just waiting ...

Nice. I like it! and thanks so so much for changing it back!! There was a few things i did notice thought that i think should be changed. Like when ...

Oh jade! this was so sad! it was so well written though. i loved the way that it painted vivid pictures in my mind. My favorite was the one where ...

I really liked this! it's very interesting and made me want to keep reading. i was very sad when it was over. I think mostly everyone covered the grammatical errors ...

OK I know this poem isn't the greatest but i just needed to get my feelings out and this is how I was feeling at the time. Feel free to ...

Oooo, i loved it!!!! and it's not twilighty at all now, so that's good. You are so mean! i was so looking forward to being in your story, stupid Faith. ...

The sound of elegant, ball gowns swishing together and boring, steady waltz music was what I heard as I arrived at the top of the staircase. I looked down at ...