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I agree with the above posters... More quotes would really add to this... I really liked the first quote and the tone of the piece as a whole... I also ...

I liked this. Not sure I can really critique the writing but I can tell you one thing.. You've certainly got me all excited about going to see him play ...

I agree with SimplyPersnikety; the titles endeared me to think this would be something really good - filled with description, yet I was disappointed by the length of it and ...

I really enjoyed this. My exams start on tuesday so it was an interesting piece. I like the rhyming structure as well. Not too sure about the lines.. "Right now, ...

I like the informal tone of it. It almost sounds like an advertisement speech at the top. Enjoyed reading it as it involves the reader.. Perhaps not the best poetry ...

Once again, I feel that this is on the border between sweet and cliched. Although I think it's a nice gesture either way. The mentionned spelling/grammar points need to be ...

Overall I like this poem. It has a nice flow to it, although there's a couple of things I am unsure about... You start with rhyme in the first two ...

I haven't seen an acrostic poem in ages.. :) This is really good. It creates a really lovely, positive description of something that is quite often hard to explain. Like ...

I really like the poem overall; and feel that most points that I would've made have already been said. Although I really don't think I like the repetition of Quote: ...

I really like this. Especially your choice of verbs; they are really effective in my opinion. Felt the burning, scraping, clawing at my lungs... The assonance works well with those. ...