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I love the shoe!

She is kinda turned wrong but i couldn't figure out how to fix that...sorry!

I do agree it is hard to see that she is crying, and the "flower in the water is not a flower, its a splash from here tears, The smudge ...

Ok, one of my first drawings

Yeah, as they said its a little creepy, but i like it, alot!

Thank you. She does have no face for a reason, i don't do faces, If you can tell the emotion of a picture without the face, that is good, but ...

yeah my favorite is the duck! :)

I'm not sure if this is the place for this

Chapter 1 The night was cold, but beautiful. The dark night sky filled to capacity with stars, and the moon was shinning brighter than I can ever remember. My seven-teen ...

OK i know this has been said but what the HAY! LOVVVVVVE it.

Limp. Breathless. and Lifeless. Pulled through a field, like a toddler with a blanket. Uncared for and beaten Bruises cover her body. The shovel drives into the ground below the ...

You open the door, yeah it's her. lying there on the floor. Do you know why? Because you hit her for the last time today. She said it was over, ...

I agree, i too can relate to this poem some and I do like the rhythm. ANNABELLE

You open the door, yeah it's her. lying there on the floor. Do you know why? Because you hit her for the last time today, and she said she wouldn't ...

Well now this poem seems liked...and i hate reviewing a poem after several people because most of it seems repetitive and unneeded so I'll cut to the chase... I liked ...