JustCloudless

You have to go crazy sometimes, Shine, hence all caps. xD I'm going to type up a story, so don't worry. Thank you, Cal! I'll go and check it out. ...

You have great description, I'd just suggest improving it when it comes to the dialogue. I'm pretty much agreeing with everyone else, though; you confused me at first. I only ...

Cool, I can rate my thread... Don't worry, it's G. :] Okay, well, I'm JustCloudless. I live in the wonderful state of Kentucky, where it's gradually turning too cold... not ...

You got me to read it through the chat, so here I am. I think what it needs is some more description, really. Your grammar and capitalization, punctuation and whatnot ...