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Re: The YWS Cliques
This is truth, Jack. This is truth. I adore your brutal honesty, monsieur. Only problem with this post is that now many people are trying to find "their clique" as ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: The colour purple
Hey, Retro Disco, June here, I enjoyed this poem; it's simply put, it's concise, and it's complete, meaning that it doesn't leave us hanging at the end. I enjoyed your ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Whale watching :D
Oh, this is lovely! Is this in BC? My favorite are the two in the middle. In terms of photography, I think the focus in those two are best, as ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: random!
Welcome to YWS! I take it you're enjoying yourself here so far? :) Have you posted anything yet? June
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: I once knew a girl
Hey there, Uo, June here, I don't really feel as if you delivered the story to us in the best manner you could have. I feel like it's a series ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Photography
Whoa, Jenthura, I absolutely adore that last picture. It's amazing and mysterious all at the same time. Where was this taken? Is the second one the original? The first one ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Revenant
Well, hello there, and look, a critique in the same day I promise it. I think I'm getting better. In passing, I've discussed some aspect or another of this poem ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Mark Your Calendars: July 11th is Radio Day
I might give some thought to a small contribution. It could be fun.
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: Let There Be Blight
Gal, I've postponed finish this far too long, and haven't quite said as much on it as I would've what with brain being not working and stuff, but here we ...
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: Rain
Hey there, I feel that this poem has potential, but I'm not quite certain that you've reached it. The concept of rain masking tears is cliche in an emo-istic sense, ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Insomniac
Hey there, Nicely done! I enjoyed the short length of the lines, the easy read to this, and the fact that you kept it light until the end. I'm going ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: The Night Sky
Hi Coter, I'm June, your reviewer for the momento -- I found that this was centered around the sensory details, dear, on things like feelings and scent and sight. I ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: A Life I Didn't Need
Hey there, duckling, This is a poem that left me wondering, and I'm not sure if I want to highlight on that as a positive or a negative, but frankly ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Boring Phone-Calls
Jasmine, I always look to your poetry as a source of inspiration. There's something unique to you about them that never les me down, as it's always fresh and unpredictable ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: { The Sky's Burning }
Hey x3, This brought to mind a warzone, and for the oddest of reasons I can't explain, I'm a huge fan of war poetry. I enjoyed the images you used ...
Jun 27, 2010
