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Re: All the Small Things
Fraaagile! Eeepity! You just get better, don't you? :P I love how you quote your photos; it gives them a fabulous touch. I really like the first one. The pink/purple ...
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: Seven Deadly Sins - Gluttony
Please don't use profanity outside of literature on the forums. ^_^ And please, don't insult each other. This is here for constructive criticism, and even though you asked them not ...
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: Disney Doodles
Demi, whoa! You're really good! I never knew you drew! I love the lion king one. It's so cute and adorable and lion-kingish, it's just wonderful. Ariel is very well ...
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: Cat Eye
Hi Rayne! This is so cool! I think it's really good, but the lines are pretty light. The wrinkles on the eyelid are a bit too sharp as well; I ...
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: Cheeko - The cute little lion cub
Aawww, Kamas! This is so adorable! I love his nose and his big back paws. They're so cute. =D The name, Cheeko, reminds me of our user, Sachiko. Like Jenna ...
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
Kyyllaaaan! rooftop. It's love. I mean, that poem is just gorgeous in every way. It's so pretty and perfect and wonderful; it's amazing. It's so sweet and realistic and wonderful ...
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: What lies beyond
Hey Kat! Sadly I have no constructive criticism to offer here. :P I really enjoyed this poem, Kat. In the third stanza, the rhyming of immortal portal kind of sounds... ...
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: A Black Rose
Aloha Hawkie! Have I reviewed you before? I don't think I have, I think I've just bothered your eyes with useless rambles in chat, no? Well! Here I go. I'm ...
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: Loss of Eden
Aaangel! June here! (Why do you use Tildes [~] so? :P) So, right, the poem: the morning is gravid with dew drops. sweet from the petals of the flowers that ...
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: -No title-
Well hey there, Darko! You haven't been around for a while (what's that about??) :P. Anyway, June here to [s]shred[/s] review your poem. =P On a side note, please remember ...
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: (poem deleted)
Hi Walshie! June here! So, I think this poem has some potential to it, but the way that it's currently written is not doing much for the audience, nor is ...
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: Flowers, a Pin, and A Bug! (16 photos)
Hey Jon! June here! ;) Right, so, Noise in a photo is that grainy look that some of your photos have. This normally is the result a photo taken in ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Death's Sunset
Hi Rosey! June here! I agree. This is a nice piece of work you have here. =D Whispered behind closed doors, silenced as soon as the conversation comes into the ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: that solitary good-bye
Hey Silented! I'm June, your critic for the moment. :) While I think you can go places with the idea of this poem, I have to say that the way ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: New
Hey there, Mayu! June here! Do you mind if I call you May? Because, it would be really cool to have another member on here with a nickname that's the ...
Jun 24, 2009
