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Re: Just Too Much
Hey Bryanne! So, this poem was fairly decent, although I have to say that it did not carry anything new for the audience. It's pretty much the most common topic ...
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Re: Yellow
Hi Kylan! Kylan doesn't get worse, he only gets better? :P In morning over cold tea , I think that the first and third stanzas are my favorite. They're so ...
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Re: Kenji
Wow, Bonnie! This is excellent! I love the wrinkles in his clothes, though I have to say that they are too vertical. I'd throw a few vertical wrinkles in there ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: Here where he will meet me
Hey Angel! June here! Most of what I would have mentioned has been said by Hannah, so for the sake of not being repetitive, I'll just say I concur Hannah ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: ya ya i know it's a little wierd
Hello, Dogs! Welcome to YWS! YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy, which means that before you post one thing, you should complete two reviews. ;) [s]what[/s] What is the point ...
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Re: Trains
Darko! Juniper here! Okay, so, to start, I'm going to be mean (:P) and say that this is by far not one of your best poems. :P To be honest, ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: I hear the whistling
Hi RJ! June here! Okay, to start, I have to say this is a wonderful poem. I really enjoy the theme of it, and it had a suspenseful touch to ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: Awareness
Hi Selin! I'm June! So, I think poems about emotions are a wonderful way to express yourself and get the words out in a way other than talking. However, I ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: Dispair
Hi Gwendolen! June here! I think this poem definitely has a lot of potential, but it seems like it's in a 'rough draft' stage. In the first stanza, you have ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: The Hunter Part 1
Leeeather! June here! Have I reviewed you before? :P It doesn't seem like I have... Lethero wiped the blood off on the white shirt of the dead man laying on ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: Terror Train Pt. 1
Hey Con! You get my 700th review! 700 is a big number. I remember when I was doing my 350th review in March...I feel pretty bad dragging up an old ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
You can't delete the actual post, but you can edit the post and remove the text, and ask a mod (anyone with a green name) to lock the post for ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: Flowers, a Pin, and A Bug! (16 photos)
Yes! I think you mean bokeh shot, no? Or, ore commonly known as Macro shot. But, yeah, I understand. ^_^ Also, you said you used iso mode on these. Iso ...
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Re: Seven Deadly Sins - Envy
Whoa, Rayne! This one is my favorite! It's even green with envy! :P (But really, I think it's just because green's my favorite color; all of your wolves are excellent) ...
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Re: Seven Deadly Sins - Greed
Oh, Greed is ferocious, is it not? :P It's really, really cute, but the part under the tail looks a little too straight. I think it should have a slightly ...
Jun 27, 2009
