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Re: I managed to get my drawings on, now I can rule the world!
Sorry! Double post! I accidentally submitted the review before I was finished; I hit the stop button, but it sent this anyway. >.>
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
Kylan! So, so, so sorry for leaving you in the middle of our conversation. My computer quit and I couldn't get it to work. So! You get my 750th review, ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Horse
Hi! How cuuuuute! Do you live near a farm? If you do, I'm only halfway jealous; farms are fabulous places. So! The picture is kind of blurry, and somehow all ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Landscape
Awww! How pretty! First, I'm jealous of your evergreens. We don't have any that grow lush like that in New York. I love the line of them, how it gradually ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Titanic Sinking
Hi Flower! Mm, this is decent! The ship is recognizable, but I think that with a bit of shading and a fair bit of details, this could be improved. The ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Rosa never swims with me.
:O Eric! I can't believe I haven't read this! Anyway, this is wonderful; absolutely, absolutely wonderful. The tone of this somewhat reminded me of Annabelle Lee by Edgar Alan Poe. ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: He, a Tree, and Me
Hi, Lilchoma! June here! :) While I strongly like some of the imagery you used throughout this, something in this poem gives me the idea that it's not standing out ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: Stranger
Hi Suspenz I'm June, your critic for the moment. ;) So! I really enjoy how you use slang here to achieve a rhythm and tone. However, there are a few ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: why a man died..
Hi Silented! Adna has done a rather fabulous indepth review on this, so to spare you the repetition, I'm just going to do a sort of overall. ;) I do ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: Before I Begin
Hi Keep A Secret! I'm June =) One of the main things about this poem that stands out to me is the fact that you're relying on rhyme for your ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: The Rapist
Hi Monument, June here! I've missed reading your poetry lately. :) Haven't seen you around much. To be honest, I do not like this poem. It's a touchy subject, and ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: (Fore)Cast a Windy Spell
Hi Galeri! June here! So, I'm terribly sorry that I did not get to this sooner/when it was mentioned; I was trying to finish up a few things before I ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: What would your Character do?
No problem at all! So, I'm just going to lock this, and you can use the other thread. ;) Thanks! June
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: What would your Character do?
Hey, Ebil! I'm assuming this is similar to the Character Answer Game . If you have something different in mind for this game, let us know here; if not, please ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: Four Roses
Oh, Hawkie! How absolutely, astonishingly cute of you! This was totally, beautifully, wonderfully excellent! I love it! The symbolization of roses was wonderful and coupled with the careless rhyme, it
Jun 30, 2009
