Juniper

Hi, Rai! Wow! If this isn't wonderful! I usually highly dislike rhyming poems because they are so easy to force and sometimes they're just not done well. :P However, this ...

Hi Jasmine! I really thought I had reviewed this already. ;) This is an absolutely beautiful poem, Jasmine. It had an excellent rhythm and flow to it, well balanced out. ...

Hi Dogs! Pay attention to Macs' review. She pointed out the spelling and punctuation slips that can be improved. ;) Firstly, I want to say that this is a pretty ...

Hi Shina! You've been on a poetry spree, have you not? :D This is a rather cute poem, I can definitely see this appreciated as a children's work. There isn't ...

Hey Carly! June here! Hmm, I can't decide if I like this more or don't like it more. XD A lion is... not the most common thing to write a ...

Wow, Gluz. Quite interesting song here. I like your talent for writing heavy metal but-- I think this song is all over the place a bit in the sense that ...

Hilo Hailey! I don't much like the usage of Bold words; it's okay for titles and such, but not really the entire poem. It's almost like you're screaming it at ...

Hi Evi! June here! Little note: Using the underscores in white shows on chimped out and on the homepage; instead to get those spaces, hold down ALT and press 255 ...

Hi Bow! So! As I mentioned on your other poem, your punctuation is a bit off. No space before the punctuation mark, dear. I think that this poem was pretty ...

Hi Bow! June here! :) To start, your rhyme scheme was a bit rough-- I think in some places it could use polishing, in a sense that you should eliminate ...

Wow! You did this on paint? You have skillz! Why is she crying, though? :-/ Okay! So, you're way more talented than I am. I could never fathom drawing on ...

Hi Awake! I think that you have a wonderful ability to create lines that raise vivid pictures in our heads. I see that in your poem here you have some ...

Hi Awake! I think that you have a wonderful ability to create lines that raise vivid pictures in our heads. I see that in your poem here you have some ...

Hi there, June here! :) So! Overall, I found this a very sweet poem. I loved how the end of it turned to hopeful things, and didn't close in a ...

Hi Bonnie! How cute! I love her blue skin and pink hair! That's an excellent combination, because the contrast is so well putout. Her leg in the foreground is pretty ...