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Re: I kinda forgot...
Oh! And we forgot to mention that critiques that are anything other than "omg, dis wz gud" are not allowed. After all, you review count needs to stay low.
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Re: Mini Waterfall
Hi Wiki! Nice shot you've got here, just a few comments Like Lily said, the sunlight washes out the top left side, and takes away from the photo. We have ...
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Re: Reach out and touch... some Newbie's hand...
rawr!!! :idea: Hi there! I'm in a random mood! (As usual)! So... anyway, well, thanks for the warm welcome, I think I'm really going to like this site.... Much gratitude ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: I kinda forgot...
Hi Snoink! I'm June, but... *scratches head* Clearly there's some error. You already have a zillion posts! Are you a robot? Okay, remember the rules, no pigs, no chatspeak, no ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Reach out and touch... some Newbie's hand...
Hi Dradian! I'm June, welcome to YWS! Stella and Colleen have pointed out some important things for you to pay attention to, so I'll just ramble about some stuff instead! ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Hello!
Welcome home, welcome home! Don't listen to Rosey. Greeters just take your cookies and say hi. And if you ask them stuff, they're pretty helpful. But, after all, they're smurfs, ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: "I just want you to know ______________________
Okay, Okay, no problem, that's what we're here for. ;) And while I doubt that's your real name, we highly encourage our members not to post their real names online, ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Poisoned Needle (Death Metal)
Hey Gluz! This was... interesting! I could really imagine a tone that this is to be put with, and I think that as far a rhythm goes, you'd have a ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Poisoned Needle (Death Metal)
Hey Gluz! This was... interesting! I could really imagine a tone that this is to be put with, and I think that as far a rhythm goes, you'd have a ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Back to Back
Aaaaashley! First of all, I miss you. You're not around enough! This poem was absolutely cute. :P Honestly, I am not a fan of love poem or anything mushy because ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Lake District summer
Whoa! This is an amazing shot. Like Lily, I thought it was a painting at first. I can tell the colors have been saturated and contrasted. ;) It gives an ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Tick. Tock.
Hi, Ambrosia! This was really creative! I like how you set the tone. We could really feel the anticipation in this. ;) You know your feet are moving but can ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Tribute to Keisha
Hi Lake Girls! I'm so sorry for your loss, but I'm glad you were able to write about it. I think this poem is decent, but I really feel like ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Through the Seams
Hi, Shina! I think that you definitely have a load of potential with this poem, but as it stands, I feel like it's kind of in a raw-ish state. I ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Overcome
Hi there! I'm June, welcome to YWS! :) To be honest, I do not really enjoy the beginning of lines with "You". It's become redundant here, dear, and it kind ...
Jul 1, 2009
