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Re: Spiraling
Hi, Kitrosemon, I think that you have something you can easily work with here, but your images, though they hold a lot of potential, are kind of clouded amongst each ...
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Re: Another
Hey, Hailey, I'm not too sure how much I like this poem, and I can't exactly pinpoint why. I think that there is a lot of room for elaboration here, ...
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Re: Hand-Made Violets
Hi, Aki, Kudos to you on writing an emotional poem based on a touchy topic. I have to say that you did a fair job in terms of what you ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Jodie’s House
My favorite Sammattoo, I haven't read works of yours in quite a while; it's in fact refreshing to see you've writ something. The problem that I am having here is ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Gaurdian Angels
Hi, Megg, Usually, I am very picky about rhyming poems -- it's hard to find one that rhymes, is consistent in both rhyme and meter and follows a perfect structure. ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: a description of space and love
Hey, Jagged, I can't say that prior to now, I've read any of your poetry, or anything of yours, for that matter. As far as first impressions go, this is ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: The Ultraviolet Catastrophe -- Summer Poetry 2010
Sorry to make two consecutive posts so close together. It makes me look bad, but, I thought I had another engagement, but I didn't, so. On listening I believe that ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: The Ultraviolet Catastrophe -- Summer Poetry 2010
Kylan, Kylan, how long has it been since I've told you what I think of your works? I adore them, simply put. On période rose et bleu (or, deserts) of ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Snowflakes from Erebus
Hi, Galerius, me here, When you first asked me to take a look at this, (which was recent enough that you should be able to recall it ;)) I remember ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: A Subject? Umm....Me?
Book is published...If I had published poetry, I'm pretty sure the readers would have died...of boredom and uncreativeness :P And your fish was a murderer? O.o Lavvi Mind if I ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: *Amar* *Vivo* *Crea* *Fe*
Hey fire :) Love's life creates faith ? So, I think this poem is cute in its meaning, and the fact that you threw the Spanish acronym in there creates ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: We are Poets
Hi, July Ruby! Given the nature of this poem, I think you have a lot of room to reach beyond what you've covered here, and expand this idea, because, in ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: The Last Words
Hi, Hibiscus, have we met? I'm June. :) Creative work here. I think that you did a nice job with this poem, but a major issue I'm having with it ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: My Sign is Vital, My Hands are Cold
Hi, Sierra, I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you. :) I have to say, it's a catchy song you've based this off of. Let's get to work: ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: What to use Pages for, and How To Promote Your Page
So... what not to make a page for? :)
Jul 16, 2010
