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Juniper

  • Narrative Poetry Re: Spiraling

    Hi, Kitrosemon, I think that you have something you can easily work with here, but your images, though they hold a lot of potential, are kind of clouded amongst each ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Another

    Hey, Hailey, I'm not too sure how much I like this poem, and I can't exactly pinpoint why. I think that there is a lot of room for elaboration here, ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Hand-Made Violets

    Hi, Aki, Kudos to you on writing an emotional poem based on a touchy topic. I have to say that you did a fair job in terms of what you ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Jodie’s House

    My favorite Sammattoo, I haven't read works of yours in quite a while; it's in fact refreshing to see you've writ something. The problem that I am having here is ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Gaurdian Angels

    Hi, Megg, Usually, I am very picky about rhyming poems -- it's hard to find one that rhymes, is consistent in both rhyme and meter and follows a perfect structure. ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: a description of space and love

    Hey, Jagged, I can't say that prior to now, I've read any of your poetry, or anything of yours, for that matter. As far as first impressions go, this is ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Ultraviolet Catastrophe -- Summer Poetry 2010

    Sorry to make two consecutive posts so close together. It makes me look bad, but, I thought I had another engagement, but I didn't, so. On listening I believe that ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Ultraviolet Catastrophe -- Summer Poetry 2010

    Kylan, Kylan, how long has it been since I've told you what I think of your works? I adore them, simply put. On période rose et bleu (or, deserts) of ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Snowflakes from Erebus

    Hi, Galerius, me here, When you first asked me to take a look at this, (which was recent enough that you should be able to recall it ;)) I remember ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: A Subject? Umm....Me?

    Book is published...If I had published poetry, I'm pretty sure the readers would have died...of boredom and uncreativeness :P And your fish was a murderer? O.o Lavvi Mind if I ...

    Jul 19, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: *Amar* *Vivo* *Crea* *Fe*

    Hey fire :) Love's life creates faith ? So, I think this poem is cute in its meaning, and the fact that you threw the Spanish acronym in there creates ...

    Jul 19, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: We are Poets

    Hi, July Ruby! Given the nature of this poem, I think you have a lot of room to reach beyond what you've covered here, and expand this idea, because, in ...

    Jul 19, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Last Words

    Hi, Hibiscus, have we met? I'm June. :) Creative work here. I think that you did a nice job with this poem, but a major issue I'm having with it ...

    Jul 19, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My Sign is Vital, My Hands are Cold

    Hi, Sierra, I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you. :) I have to say, it's a catchy song you've based this off of. Let's get to work: ...

    Jul 19, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: What to use Pages for, and How To Promote Your Page

    So... what not to make a page for? :)

    Jul 16, 2010


No spring nor summer beauty hath such grace as I have seen in one autumnal face.
— John Donne