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Re: my monologue
Moved to Other. ;)
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: I Can Has Fotograffy?
Some point-and-shoot cameras do have a bracketing mode, also known as Auction mode on some cameras. ;)
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: Beach Photos!
Oh! Number Six. Okay, got it. (an indepth on this? Okay, um.) For starting! You're close. I would suggest moving back, and approaching the photo at a different angle than ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: Beach Photos!
Hello, Ellie! Juniper here! I mean, that's *so* not obvious! ;) Let us see! You should crop the first picture! Too much vast blueness threatening to swallow us down into ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: 3 Haikus
Hello, Ab! I'm June, welcome to YWS! Ah, Haiku. I love them, and not enough people write them. It's so wonderful when people actually take the time to write them, ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: Blossoms of Phnom Pehn
Hello, Kylan! This is beautiful. Definitely a favorite of mine by you. It is strange. I no longer think about the food. Food is a painful and distant memory. It ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
Hi Kylan! You only told me that Yellow has been updated once! You didn't tell me about seasickness. :P (And when I was scrolling, I somehow accidentally locked the thread... ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Sol Invictus on Trial
Hi Galeri! My apologies on getting to this so late. I had a review started and saved, and somehow it eludes me on this computer, so: As I read through ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Thorn's Rose Prologue
Hi, Pepper! June here! My apologies on getting to this so late (let's just say fashionably late :P) and my apologies in advance if I sound harsh. Closer, closer, closer. ...
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: Walking Backwards
Hi, Stripes! June here! I thought this was cute! But, then again, everything that involves sisters is cute to me, as long as it's not about my sisters. *mean* Anyway! ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: recognize
*moved to other*
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: drunk driver's persepective.
*Moved to Other*
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: reflection
Hi, Lauren! Let me begin by saying that this is sad. If it's a true story, I'd like to say that it's wonderful that you're able to write about this ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: Butterfly Memories
Hello, Ellie! June here! So, let's get down to business! >> First impressions • Force. As I read this the first time, I felt that there was a very, very ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: My first poem
Hi, Zaneman! Welcome to YWS! Like most poetry, Zane, there were things I liked about this and things I didn't. I did like how you expressed a tone through short ...
Jul 18, 2009
