Juniper

Hello, Saphy! June here! [You do poetry? I did not know this!] Anyway! I think this is a creative start, dear, but it could use a bit of work. :P ...

Hello, Katie! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, your reviewer for the moment. Before I begin, I want to remind you of the 2:1 ratio policy rule we have here; for ...

Hey Pudin! June here! Welcome to YWS! One dark night she shouted to herself as her beated lke fire and went rigid a stone. Okay! So, the opening of a ...

Hello, Cubed! I apologize for not getting to this sooner. I meant to, but I didn't have the time. You have a really creative idea here, and for the most ...

Hello, Doogzie! I haven't read anything of yours in ages! Great to see more of your work, at last. Beautiful opening. Very poetic and subtle, but extremely effective. The sea ...

Hi, Game changer! June here! It's an okay poem. I honestly didn't get much for it other than a person speaking of the aftermath of a heartache of some sort. ...

Hello, Vera! June here! :) I think you have a decent work here, but of course, it could use some improvement. For now, it's a bit rough, but it can ...

Hey, Joe! June here! Haven't read anything of yours in a while. Good to see you around here. :) I think this poem is great. There isn't much that can ...

Hello, Abby! I'm June, welcome to YWS! Definitely a nice improvement from your previous, though you still have room to improve. Rhyme is your crutch here; it's restricting you, and ...

Hello, Georgie! Welcome to YWS, I'm June. :) I think that you have a decent idea here, and with a bit of work, it can work . However, as it ...

Hello, Texan! This is cool! I definitely want to see more of your work, Texan. :) The idea is somewhat cliche, a bit over used, but it's nice-- I love ...

Hey Llama! ThisIsAUserName is right; you should have two reviews to every submission you make. This is a decent picture. There isn't much of a focal point here, which isn't ...

Wow, Vonika! Impressive! (Really, this is great-- cars + photography = win!) I have to ask, did you bracket with these, or use a filter? I'm wondering how you got ...

Hello, Meepey! How cute! Definitely looks like you were paying attention in class! I'm with roon: the lack of a face places a greater emphasis on the dress-- which is ...

*rubs hands* Hello Lilianthus! June here! Okay! So, the first three photos are good-- we'll come back to those with criticism. I don't really like 4 - the end. They're ...