Juniper

Roon, I love your art. This is really good! I don't have much criticism for this, other than make her shoulders an itty bit more visible. Other than that, it's ...

Hey Voxina! Did you do this on Paint? If so, you're really good. I like the detail on the dog; the spray tool really created a nice, fuzzy effect for ...

Eek! Barely anyone has reviewed this! I think it's cool, Mimi, though I do have to say that the green... goop dripping is a bit much. It's a little... gross-looking? ...

Hey Rayne! June here! Awww, such a cuuutie wolf! I do agree that her ears are short and the neck is a bit long, but the muzzle is a bit ...

Hey Out of the box! Welcome to YWS! Nice job for a first poem! There's definitely room for improvement, but nice job starting off. To begin, I have to say, ...

MY HEART IS HAPPY. Snoink poetry. Mmm. So! When I read this the first time, I instantly enjoyed it. To start, it sounds like it's coming from a frustrated bus ...

Hey there! This is decent, but it needs work! It's skinny, and could definitely use some fat! What I caught here was a person/character struggling to fight back, who's essentially ...

Hey there! I'm not so sure of this poem. I didn't really like it, because it portrays a difficult time for this character, where the character is struggling both emotionally ...

Hi, Yoyo! This is very bad! A Yoyo poem unreviewed? We must remedy... (This has made my day much better. I have been longing for an enjoyable poem worth the ...

Hey there! June here! I am not terribly fond of this poem, but it's not entirely bad. Of the first things I noticed, I found that this reads more like ...

Hey, Ellie! June here! :D I meant to review this so much sooner, but never found the time, I guess! Here we go: My first impression on this poem was ...

Hey Vampire! June here! It's an okay poem. :P Perhaps I'm a bit biased in saying this, but poems relating to love, and anything surrounding love are a bit overdone. ...

Hey there, Hawksie! June here! SO! Pay attention to the things the previous reviewers pointed out. They have a point! Now, for my shred... I just want to watch you ...

Hello, BG! Juniper here to review this. :) Hope I'm not too harsh on you... Tears in their eyes Quiet sobs are heard As watery eyes look towards A wooden ...

Hello, Gun! June here! So! You have a decent poem here, or a decent start to one. This could use a bit of work; for now, it's slightly rough in ...