Juniper

Hi, Ambrosia It's an okay start. I'd love to see you build onto this, make it fuller, more substantial. For now, it's kind of empty, kind of like a soliloquy. ...

Hey Jaderemoi! June here! In all honesty, I didn't find this prologue interesting. I didn't think it had any bit of a "hook" to it, and in a strange way, ...

Hey Creative! Decent start. As some of the other reviewers mentioned, I think this could use a good deal of building on. Right now, you're giving us a few pieces ...

Hello, sheep! I think this poem has some potential, but could use a bit of work. To start, the organization stood out to me; the thoughts in this seemed scattered, ...

Also, not to sound rude, why would I have then sound human when they're clearly not? I was using the very proper dialogue to show the difference in species. Fair ...

Oh, and Kylan & Demeter, it goes without saying. Gotta second that. :P

Heylo, Tiff! June here! Two excuses: I haven't reviewed much standardized prose lately, I've dealt more in informative articles, minimalist, and experimental type writing lately, that I think I may ...

Kylankylankylan!!! Breathtakingly well done! I can't say that this is awesome in the same way that apostasy and hospice are, but, this is definitely beyond fantastic. Not to say that ...

- and in the bodies of featherless birds proud in flight on flapless wings, we did transgress imaginary bounds, saw terror evident in the eyes of skies unsecured peace and ...

Kylaaaaan! Okay, I officially suck at reviewing. Wasn't it last week when I promised you a review on this? At any rate, it's my 850th (which means I ruin the ...

Hey Kylan! June here! [I know, I need to review Yellow. Will do, will do, I promise.] Alright, to begin, I'm kind of short on time [again], so I think ...

Hello again, Hollianthus! Busy week for me. I haven't had time to review or anything, so, really, really sorry on that. And, also, I keep reminding people that I'm harsh ...

Hey there Ballet Dancer! June here! (I know, I'm a pretty harsh critic when it comes to photos, so bear with me. >.

True. :P TPBM hates laptop touch pads

Looking snazzy, Kylan. XD I love your look in the second picture. And how tall are you??