Juniper

Persephonia, The problem that I'm having with each of these is that there's a lack of connectivity between your images, your words, and the emotion that you're trying to work ...

Hi, Kaywiia, June here, I opened my eyes, my back stiff from the cot's springs. I groan, and look in the mirror. I didn't even loook like myself. Maintain an ...

Hi, Eritela, I'm June, let's have a look, shall we? I don't think there's anything bad about this poem, rather there are little things to this that disagree with one ...

Rosey! I've read this before you corrected it, but I never got around to reviewing it; brace yourself. It doesn't seem like this is only my 1300th review, you know; ...

Blackbird, Very well done, I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this poem. I love the way you crafted every line as an image that works so well with ...

Hey, Persephoneia Tanka is indeed one of the more addictive forms of poetry, especially given that they're generally short enough to practice a lot. Here, I think you did okay; ...

Hi, Adeera, June here, I'm not too sure that the elements that you've constructed your poem out of are working to your advantage. Because you chose to structure your poem ...

Hey there, Mr Sillie, I'm June, I think this poem is a certain kind of cute, but there are some things about it that I don't think work too well. ...

Mm, fresh meat. *rubs hands together* Don't allow yourself to preface your works with things that will make your audience of critics want to tear it apart; it really takes ...

Hi, Blackbird, June here, On first read, I thought that this was a bit a bit of an overused theme to follow, but I think this has more than you ...

Hey, Disco, June here, I liked where you were going at the beginning. While I think that in terms of structure, you could do better because the meter in the ...

Very cute, Demmie, (While I can understand morse, I cheated and used the translator, because reading it isn't quite the same as hearing it... :P) I don't have any negative ...

Hey Moo! Overall, I think the idea of the kindness here will work wonderfully for a poem, but I don't think that the way you've wrote it makes it fit ...

Hi, Pepper, It's good to see that your poetry has come ways stylistically! Your formatting isn't terrible here, but for the length of your lines, I think that this could ...

Hey there, June here, I'm not too sure if I like this poem or not. I think that you might be able to go places with it if you rework ...