Juniper

Thanks for the review, Mandorelute. :) If you can't tell, it's about Soldiers, haha. I've edited the poem a few times since posting, and updated my original post.

Sure you can! Feel free to edit this post for that, as this counts as a new literary thread.

Hey Again, Joshua, :) My punctuation corrections will be in bold. ---- This chink, my daughters fiancé , was on his way for dinner and to spend the night. Kate ...

Mandorelute, How good to see you around here! I've missed reading your poetry, although I never comment. It's not often that I find poetry that keeps me reading after the ...

Hey there Joshua :), I generally don't do nitpicks, but there are a few places I'd like to 'pick' at here. Overall, I think the story is impressive. As I ...

Irishfire! Hello! You have a cool username, haha. I'm June, your reviewer for the moment. Skillet, huh? Not every day I find a fan of them! (I'm a closet fan, ...

Hello Auteur :). I'm June, and I'll be your reviewer for the moment. I think that this story has a ground for potential. I have followed this since you posted ...

Hello! June here! For the fire pictures, I personally think that the bronzed effect is the best effect that you've got here. It's pretty interesting, and the rest of the ...

Aloha, Kammie! Can't quite grasp this one. It's a decent poem, I think, but it seems more like a start to me. I think you should work on revising this. ...

Incog, this is marvelous. Great work on pose and proportion. Great drawing for the most part. Red - Pay attention to that thigh; it's a bit thin and straight. I ...

Adelaide. How good to see you here. Great to finally become acquainted with you. If you need anything, you'll certainly find me at your service.:)

By the time we get to the proposal of our hypothesis, we would have devised an experimentation.

Scientifically? We have already defined our problem: Does SPEW exist or not? Now, we must gather information about this, to provide reasoning to why it would or wouldn't exist, and ...

How can you be sure? We can't. Just as we cannot be sure that SPEW exists or not.

That's an image of a pumpkin spewing out its insides, not for the organization that the acronym SPEW represents.