Juniper

Rosey! June here! I meant to review this when you first posted it; I thought I did, but apparently not! Here we go: Blatant language - Too much of it ...

Hey there, Rosey! June here! Pardon me if I'm harsh. There are too many spaces in this that need to be filled in. You start us off with one sentence ...

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Hello there, Zerkie! June here; I figured I should give you a review, since your awesomeness calls for it. :) I usually don't do nitpick-y reviews or pay attention to ...

I think the mods idea is good, however maybe also open-able by instructors? As there is not always a mod, but an instructor is, for instance at the moment. If ...

Hey there Audrey! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, nice to meet you! 1. What is the current ratio for reviews, I have seen 2:1, 3:1, and 4:1? 3:1; it was ...

Hmm, I tried looking into it, Brian, but I don't know if the indents can be avoided? It doesn't look bad, actually. It's pretty much standard for writing (take a ...

Hey there, Tariq! Good to finally read something of yours. :) Okay! Overall, I think that this is a good poem, and there are a few things that can be ...

Hey there, Josh! I am so, so sorry for the delay on this. Seeing as you've got a fair share of critiques here, I'll try my best not to repeat ...

Ahlan wa Sahlan YWS, Brian! Good to have you here. :) I am Juniper, but you can call me June. If you have any questions or need any general help ...

You wish, Gal. You wish.

Check the dates before you reply to threads, please. Try not to bump up old posts; this is 4 years old. Locked.

Love the little puddle-circles. The problem with this photo is your composition. It throws the focus off, and I'm going to go right ahead and assume that your focus is ...

Hey Kylan! Behind the waterfall, I'm not exactly sure where to start on this one. I like it for the imagery you're using, but I kind of think that you're ...

I changed the wording of the ending, but the meaning's pretty much the same. Haha, does it seem like a love poem?