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Re: What on YWS is unnecessarily difficult?
Out of all these comments, the only thing I've really had much trouble with is Rosey's last point. I did like being able to scroll down during reviews to read ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Server Restart Automagic?
Nate! When you updated YWS, you didn't tell us we were moving to a magical server! Where are the unicorns?
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: 600,000+ Posts!
YWS is getting so big and grown up... *sniff*
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: A lone bench....
Whoa! That's a beautiful photo! Awesome angle, fabulous focus, wonderful clarity-- perfect; the only thing that could aid this is a touch of editing to make the bench arm more ...
Nov 6, 2009 -
Re: Design YWS Banners!
Are .gif banners allowed?
Nov 5, 2009 -
Re: Word Counts!
75,540. (Yes, that's seventy five thousand, five hundred forty :P) I'm done! And next week, I'll start on the sequel. :D
Nov 5, 2009 -
Re: The King of Carnations
Interesting. :P - Kylan, As I have said about many of your poems in Yellow, this is an enjoyable poem. Unlike some of those in Yellow, there's no hesitation in ...
Nov 5, 2009 -
Re: Military Fiction
Hell-ooo there! I'm June! Welcome aboard the ship that is YWS! I'm going to review this for you. :) The title of this caught my eye, probably because I have ...
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: The last year...
Hey there, Sara! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I'm going to be your critic for the moment. I usually don't do nitpicks, but there are some places here where ...
Oct 28, 2009 -
Re: first and last kiss
Hey there, Zaddie! Juniper here. :) Hm, let's see. I'm not too sure I can thoroughly enjoy this, for a few reasons! I think it's a little cliche. Cliches in ...
Oct 28, 2009 -
Re: Beginnings
Hello there, Rosaic! June here again. :) Haha, so, the first thing I noticed about this after looking at the picture is that it's set in the wrong time of ...
Oct 28, 2009 -
Re: Granite Pillar (Edited)
Hello there, Rosey! June here. :) This needs adding on to, Rosey. I think it's a good sketch to work from, and I enjoy how there wasn't too many details ...
Oct 28, 2009 -
Re: Last Breath Reminiscence
Kammieyaz, great poem. Tres enjoyable; I'll put a better review on this when I have a moment, but I'm in the middle of Essaying (so, what? I just made it ...
Oct 28, 2009 -
Re: Changes (October 26, 2009)
Naaate! I love it so much! Thank you! It's quite fantastic, and barely seems like a step backwards at all. :) - June
Oct 26, 2009 -
Re: Shy?
There forums are made for works that you wish to recieve critiques on. A word is impossible to critique; try including this word in a poem of some sort, and ...
Oct 26, 2009