Juniper

Good day, Sureal. June here. :) Good work, this. I'd like to follow along should you continue it. I didn't notice any errors in this, and don't really have the ...

Good Evening Teddiebear, I would give this poem a fair bit of restructuring and rewording. The message that you're laying out for us is good stuff, but it's a beginning. ...

Hey Logan! June here! My apologies for not getting to this sooner. I was a little worried that Marge would kill Emily, haha. Marge seems a bit bipolar, too-- it's ...

Hello, Amber! June here! Nice work here. I think you need to focus on finding a poetic voice, a voice that defines what you want to say in words other ...

Hey there, Eric, My apologies for not posting my review last night. I won't even make excuses for me, but I'm sorry. :P I like this. I like it a ...

June The day was long. Minutes slogged past as traffic came to a standstill. June slouched behind the wheel of her car, wishing the cars would just move . But ...

That's really cool, Mia! I like it! It's simple but clever. :)

Hey there, Roob! Welcome to YWS! I'm June. :) It's great to meet you! As Ames said, there's confusion about the review to work ratio. As of now, it's recommended ...

Hey Sobe, Nice start here. I think that instead of relying on rhyme to carry your poem to us, you should try to get the message down, dear, and then ...

Hello, Ofir! June here! It's been quite a while since I've read your work. As for titles, I'm not sure. Maybe Justine and the Roses? I don't like Losing your ...

Hey there, Kammie! June here! The first thing I noticed about this set was the washed out color in these. What kind of camera do you use? Try shooting in ...

Hola there. Meant to get to this sooner. Of the choices you're offering to choose from, I like the D90 the most. It's expensive, but it's most worth it. It's ...

Hey there, Ellie! I'm June; welcome to YWS! Nice work here! I'm not very fond of the one of the trees because it's oversaturated to a point where it stands ...

Good day, Jigsy! June here! As far as first impressions go, I could appreciate this piece. The first thought that came to my mind was, "Yay, morbidity" but as I ...

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