Juniper

Hey Logan, June here, This is good! As far as story goes, you should know that you've got me hooked. ;) There's nothing major here to talk about. Your sentences ...

Hey Kika, June here, Of the many things I often repeat whilst reviewing poetry, I find myself most often telling people to put their poems to the test by removing ...

Hey Bookmarker, This seems like a sketch to work from. I think you should take time to expand this, because as it stands it's not entirely realitic. > The first ...

Hello, Melvin! Welcome to YWS! I am June, and I'm going to review this for you. Oftentimes, I say to people to disregard rhyme when writing a poem. It's a ...

Psh, Tiff, way to spring a poem on me that doesn't deserve criticsm. :P But, anywhoo, I'll have a stab and see what I can do. I like the message ...

Fishr! I don't generally do nitpicks, but if you would like me to do a more indepth review on this, leave a note in my guestbook, and I'll be more ...

Kammie, The Scarlet Ibis is of my favorite short stories. It's such a touching, heart wrenching tale, and I remember crying the first time I read it. I think you ...

Kylaaaan, I would have reviewed this much sooner if I only could find something to say on it. I feel like most of my commentary on your poetry, espcially as ...

Paaaaalantalid. I've missed your work. Your fluent style, seemingly effortless creativity. It's great to see something of yours 'round here. This is good. Perhaps it's the rhyme, but I don't ...

Haha, Sureal, that was great. It did live up to expectations. Probably went over a little, too. I don't know what I was expecting, haha, but this delivered excellently. I ...

Hey Sureal, This is great. This really heightens the tension that the characters (and audience) develop in the first part. If you had done this any other way, I'd probably ...

Hey Amber! This is pretty impressive. It's excellent, and so far, I've used this picture twice as an example when I've shaded drawings. My only quip is the shaky lines; ...

Hey Mo, Nice work, haha, especially for a little person! It's quite cool how the warmth of the colors reflects the brick wall of the room and such. It's a ...

Hey, sorry to comment again on the thread when it's not a review. Try photo filtre. Available for download here ( ), photo filtre is a basic photo editing program ...

Whoa, I never reviewed this? Hey P-Crocky, June here. :) Like I said on Aim, I really like this. You have a creative eye and it shows here. For some ...