Juniper

Hey Rosemary! June here. Your poetry has seen a steady improvement since the beginning of this year. I'm glad to see that. I think this poem is good. It has ...

Sachiko! How melancholy and cute this is. So bittersweet and gentle; an overall appreciative piece. In an odd way this makes me happy... maybe it's the clementines and the peaceful ...

Snoinkarina, I enjoyed this. It had a wonderful, melancholy tone to it that carried on - as my interest did- until the end. I'm not too fond of the raising ...

Hello, Jigs! I liked this! A bit better done, better exposed than the last short piece you posted. In the beginning, you had interest, but you didn't quite have the ...

Hey Kylan, This is one of those pieces of yours that I really enjoy reading, but is near impossible to critique. :P I would recommend maintaining a narration style in ...

Howdy Texan. How do you do? Nice shots here! The sky's pretty impressive, eh? Remember to keep your horizons straight. In most of the pictures, your lines are off kilter. ...

Hello! More of your photos? Yay! The first one is impressive. Eliza raises a valid point, but you're allowed to break rules in photography. I like the centered building and ...

Hi, Mo! At first glance, the darker one looks like a silhouette of a woman. Haha, I wouldn't have guessed that these are leaves. But, this is cool! Rather abstract ...

Hi, Maki! June here. Nice work here. I can't draw anime for the life of me, so it's great to see someone who can. I'm going to throw around some ...

Good day, Conrado, I like this poem a lot. Your narrative style does well here, but I would recommend trimming any and every excess words that you can eliminate, because ...

Hi there, Mia. June here. :) I think that this is a decent effort. As with any piece of writing, it has its rough edges that could stand to go. ...

Great stuff, Nate. Good, good. :D Thank you.

Wow, Ellie. I'm pleasantly surprised. Pretty impressed by this. This is beautiful. You do an excellent job with personification in this poem. I hate to touch structure, but I have ...

Coon, I probably shouldn't pay so much attention to judging poems based on the genre they're posted in (which, by the way, it's horribly confusing to tell where to put ...

Hey there, These are breathtaking. I love your talent for photography. You really have an artistic eye. In the first, the palm leaf on the side is an eye puller/distraction ...