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Re: FB Book 1 Ch 1 Part A
Hi Fruits Basket! Here I [finally] am! I must confess that I'm not too much of a fanfic or anime fan, and have never read this anime, so my knowledge ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Run Away: Run Faster
Hey there, Spiral. I'm June, your critic for the moment. I don't think you have quite delivered as much interest for your audience as you could have. Though the primary ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: 100 Reviews in 15 days!
I'm lagging badly. It's getting harder for me to type, so I've only done 962-947 reviews... which is... 13? 15? No idea. I need to seriously step up my game. ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Slide - Photography - [Updated Dec. 6]
Thanks again for the commentary, everyone. I have another shot of Summer Poetry, but I'm not sure if I like it, because the angle's a bit bland; I'm not sure ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Riddle me this!
What is lighter than air, can be seen by unaided eyes, and if you put it in a barrel it will make the barrel lighter?
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Two Quick Updates (Dec. 6 2009)
This is awesome! Thank you, Nate!
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: If Pinocchio...
If Pinocchio said that his nose was about to grow, would it?
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: The day my life went wrong
Hey Forest, I'm going to be blatantly honest in this review. Hope I'm not too harsh. :) I don't like this. It feels like you were trying to give your ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Hopes and Dreams
Hey Forest, About a year and a half ago, someone told me that in writing poetry you have to distinguish your narrative story voice from your poetic voice. If you're ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: LordLoredaen's Art Thread
Hey there! Nice drawings! I recommend going over human figure - or should I say alien figure- a bit because the joints are a bit rounded and soft where they ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: More of My Drawings
Hey thar, I like your style, Dreamer. Your sketches are rather rustic and nonetheless rather brilliant. I wish I could draw like you. :) I would recommend strengthening your outer ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Bubblez
Hey Channon! These are good. The angle is interesting - which is good - but, the composition is a little off-kilter. Her chin is cut off, and I think it ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: To Be a Proton
Ell! I liked this! I do heavily agree with Snoinkarina that 'they' is a weak word in poetry. Kill the usage of it, and 'that' as much as you can ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: The Life not Lived
Hey there, Holianthus! My deepest apologies for not reviewing this sooner. I quite enjoyed this, Holly. I would reword the beginning-- it sounds like the words are uncertain and the ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: monarchs
Hey there, Kylan, Things brings to mind modern Japanese poetry -- or reformed haiku as some would put it. On an examined read, it does show a bit, haha, that ...
Dec 6, 2009
