Juniper

Congratulations, Jet!

Haha, how cute that you pointed out the usage of E. I'll be sure to use the word Fahrvergnügen next time around, though I'm not even sure what kind of ...

I was aiming for 50, at least, but the storm killed my computer, so I did 36. :D I was getting tired, though, and my reviews were getting progressively redundant. ...

Hey Coter, June here, I like the sun. It comes with it its warm, loving arms like its powerful yet healing rays. I really like the sun. It is the ...

Oh my goodness, if this didn't make my day, it made my year. This was... I don't even know. Goodness. I knew the Sesame Street characters weren't all the innocent ...

Hey there, June here, I'm going to have to go after Greenwitch here and say that there wasn't anything particularly interesting about this particular love story. We commonly find stories ...

Charm, The problem that I am having here is pretty much the same as Firestarter expressed: this is all overused. I think it's possible to get away with an overused ...

Hey, I don't know what to do with this, haha. You had something going there at the beginning that you kind of lost and kind of got back in the ...

Aushy! It's wonderful to see you writing poetry, Generally, when people approach poetry for the first time, I find that they take to rhyming poems to experiment with. I'm not ...

Thane... haha, I don't even know you, but if these are the thoughts you have on average, I am very concerned for you. This is one of the most morbid ...

Hey, Lily, Here again, I feel that you could do a lot better without the rhyme scheme that you're using. I don't feel that rhyme is everything in a poem, ...

Hey, Fiction! To me, this poem is in suit with it's title. There's little conveyance of emotion, or any feeling for that matter, and because of that, I'm indifferent to ...

Lily, I understand that you're writing about something personal to you, and by no means is what I say about the poem directed to you or to your hurt. I ...

Hey, Those big words in the middle of the poem are very distracting! Provided that the rest of the poem doesn't take on any intricate structure performances with size or ...

Hey there, I'm going to assume that this is part of a story, but I'm not sure where to find the rest of it. I think that this is a ...