Juniper

Domi, Here I [finally] am. I was pretty much awed while reading this -- your writing style is very fluent and entrancing, but we shall save the praise for later. ...

Hey! This is a beautiful photo. The clarity and focus is wonderful, as well as composition and such. The snow star lens works excellently for this photo, and all I ...

Good day, Aunna, This wasn't bad, but I felt that you lingered too long on one idea before moving on to the next. You pretty much stated that the person ...

Hey there, To describe love and hearts in the same ways that they've been done for the past handful of years easily becomes tedious to read over and over again. ...

Ames! Good to finally see some of your photography, and you know? You're not half bad. My main quip in all of these is your lines -- try to line ...

Hello, Ela! I've seen you reviewing around the forums and I figured I would swoop in for a review. I would say to try not to narrate your poems like ...

Hi Auna, I'm June, your critic for the moment. This isn't a bad start to a poem, though I think it could stand to some improvement. To begin, I've heard ...

Tiffany, It's impossible to critique the content on this. It's touching. [[Your hands are cold, gripping my arms[[[ as a ]]]vice, while my eyes remain closed.]] I feel like [as ...

Hey there! Fair job done here. I'm a touch biased, haha - it's rather difficult for me to appreciate love poems because they're such a common topic that it's so ...

Nutty, Only direct nitpick >> A kick to the stomach, I gritted my teeth and bared it. I'm not sure if you're talking about baring teeth, if which it should ...

Pengu, As I have verbalized to you in chat, I really cannot critique this. I echo Kylan on the use of your tilde; replace it with a dash, and jaundiced ...

Hey there, Man! I'm sorry for not getting around to this sooner; I'm easily distracted. ^^ Content wise, I have to say that I enjoyed this. You raised some pretty ...

Kylan, Your exposition of setting in this piece is excellently done. Your vivid description of it does not fail here, and I think you've come very close to catching the ...

Haaawkie, This is cute. It actually reminds me of a poem I wrote a few months ago. I don't think your closing line does justice to the poem. It's one ...

Kammieyaz, Great personification of wintry spirit. I love how your focus was on the smaller things without diverting out attention from your target topic. I do not like how you ...