Juniper

Hi Tiger! This wasn't bad -- you have a consistent rhyme scheme and it's good to see that you maintained it throughout the poem. I'm not too sure that I ...

Elizabeth, Perhaps it's not a bad effort put into this, but I feel that you need to utilize your space in words better than this. Try to avoid narrating emotions ...

Poet -- I can't see much value in the ways of meaning to this; I can't tell if the poetic focus of this is in rhythm; my pronunciation in French ...

Hey there, To begin, I'm not sure if the title of this should be the Beginning of my book, because Bigging is technically not a word, but if it was, ...

Nicely done, Splooshie, It made me very small, like a child again. Should this be, "It made me feel" or should it stay this way? Impressively done as always -- ...

Kylan, It is late, and I don't have much time [or brain] for an indepth review for this. I'm familiar with this painting of Monet's, and I felt, in reading ...

999. This leaves 48. Totally doable. I might finish this soon, and start a new round for myself on the 20th of December.

Hey there, Irish! Not a terrible shot, but not good either. We don't exactly have a focal point here, dearie, so our eyes are wandering all over looking for something. ...

Good gosh, Dreamer, these are impressive! Shade minor detail more; the man's tie is a bit blank, and I think a little more shading would be better on him. Amazing ...

Hey there, How creative! I love the different season to a windowframe idea. Really cute. I also love the rough sketch style, though watch your lines. Don't make them too ...

Juuuuuliet -- Nice; cross processing effect? I like this; the centered focus of the star is excellent. The top is a bit annoying in its darkness, because it's only on ...

Ames -- I see improvement! This makes me happy! Second post > First: I like this one! The angle is great -- I love the sensitive coloring; it works well ...

Sare -- I can't remember the last time I reviewed you! Good to see you writing again. I have two major complaints with this poem. [one] Narrative. Let it be ...

Blinkage -- Not sure if I ever reviewed you before, but there's a first for everything, no? You've got potential with the camera -- use it to its fullest. One ...

Hey Pudin! When adding photos from a host site, be sure to use the direct link and put that in the [img] tags. I fixed it for you; the three ...