Juniper

Hey Kate! A short, sweet poem. :) I like this -- I felt it's concise enough to be enjoyable (and for some off reason, I see this engraved on lockets... ...

Hey there! This is indeed a pretty poem. As Snoink said, you make vivid images run together, and you do it excellently. The words pull us towards the climax -- ...

Hey there! Have you solved the formatting problem already? It appears well formatted to me, but I'm not sure if it's to your liking. I really like this poem -- ...

Hey there, Poems are funny things. :P Usually if I don't like the rhyme/structure of it, then it'd make sense to like what it's about, but usually if I don't ...

Hey there, I can't say that this stood much ground in the ways of poetry; I'm sorry for your loss-- if this was a personal reflection, and writing is a ...

Kamas! Second Installment I don't like the angle of the first horsehead and the lighting tapers off; it's okay, but more of a snapshotesque photo than something exclusive. :) Pretty ...

Hey Tariq, Seemingly not a bad effort put in here. I'm not too clear what you're getting at though; your introduction briefed us on things that ruin highschool and the ...

No worries, Emoticon. :) If my criticism was too harsh, I apologize. I often review at late hours and don't think clearly. Nonetheless, I critiqued it because it was posted ...

Miral -- There's something intriguing about the way you write, although I can't say what it is. I like the rush that your words carry on with when you start ...

Hey Laura, Lacking originality? Haha, it may lack a few things, silly, but originality might have found a spot here-- it's not every day that you find the random poems ...

Errrric, Seriously. You go too long without sharing much of your writing. Good to see you still have your flair. Little things here need to be addressed, which I will ...

Gasp! No one has reviewed this yet? Hey Anna; June here. :) I like the images and play on words that you have here. Creativity speaks in this, but as ...

Miral, I like this -- the beginning was off to a weak footing, but as we progressed beyond the second line, the pull increased where you spun us off into ...

Caaaaaanada, Smorg pretty much struck the nail on the head. I agree -- I feel that this could be developed into more. The close repetition in the beginning kind of ...

Hey Manda, Memorial poems are sweet. The rhyme here is good in consistency, but I would recommend not relying too heavily on it, because it dominates the poem and overrides ...