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GO, Tohru! :)

It won't let me send gifts to Buscador!. It says he doesn't exist. :( Have you tried going to his profile and clicking the gifts tab and then sending a ...

Heeeeey, I know you, don't I? ;) Welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy your stay around here; if you need anything at all, turn to me. ;) Junisaur

Heylo! Contrast is pretty much what it always is-- the difference of tones in a picture. In photography editing, it's usually used to bring out color and add shading between ...

Hey Corwin, I'm not worth much in the world of lyrics; I can sing some of them and that's about it, sadly. I'm not really well at critiquing them, nor ...

Hey GeeBee, welcome to YWS! Her eyes wondered around the room. Wandered. She layed still in the bed, confused. Past tense of lay is laid, but here you need this ...

Kammieyaz-- Let's break this down: Forgotten sun-tiles -- on the red brick path they lay This, to put it bluntly, is distracting. See, the dash would indicate a break, and ...

Hello, again! Sorry! I meant to make a mental note to explain any thing I mentioned... By Gamma I meant Gamma Correction points, and basically in photo editing it's where ...

Hullo, Kylan! Your opening paragraph is long. All of the information in it, as well as its precise wording (for the most part) all should stay, but you should probably ...

Eee! You posted pictures! This is awesome; it feeds my morbid interest for photography and I get to critique! I'm going to go with the thumbs up/thumbs down approach and ...

Pepperonata! My apologies for not completing this review much earlier on. Here I am now! And, because I have time to use (read as waste), I'm going to be this ...

Hullo, Author! As Sureal said, never worry about making it look all fancy. Just providing your general comments to the work would be just as wonderful, provided that a review ...

Anyone can give advice on writing, whether they are a writer or not. Some of the best critics don't write.

Hello, Gun! This was good! It's good to see more of your poetry around here. This reminded me of the The Swan Princess ballet-- and that probably sounds weird, but, ...

Helloooo there, Eddie! This is a fantastic step up from your usual poetry, and I love how you're improving. As far as technical things go in this, you have a ...