Juniper

Not bad, There are things I like about this -- such as the elegance in some of the words, the flow, the creativity-- and there are others that I don't ...

Hooper! I like this. You have a beautiful narrative style that brings great images to mind -- wonderful tone of blues set forth in here. I genuinely enjoy this. I'd ...

Hey, Nap! A pretty scary poem here. Interesting. Can marrows split open? Marrows are what's in the bone, so by the time it splits open, you know, you're looking at ...

Hey there! Nice work. I can't do rhyme like this, so I applaud you on it. For a first poem, this is actually good. Dreamer said it best about the ...

Hey there, Not too bad -- pay attention to most of what Shina pointed out, because that's some pretty important stuff! As Dreamer said, this is more or less a ...

Hey, Howler! Welcome aboard the nuthouse that is YWS! ;) What a clever idea for a poem! I really like this -- it's wonderful and short and totally clever, but ...

Hello! I won't do a bit by bit critique here, but I'm just going to say that I thought you had a reasonable idea behind this, but I think you ...

Jon-- The main problem I am having with this poem is trying to fit my head around why you chose the wording you're working with here. I don't see the ...

Nesh!! Good to see you around. I had no indication that you were around or alive, or anything. :P (It's strange, because I was rereading yours letters last night and ...

Kylanesque! (I need more nicknames for you...) I keep meaning to review as soon as you post something, but I am a chief at procrastinating. This reminds me of cantelope, ...

Hey, you, They say that across the Damascan plains where lions sleep with dirty manes and wish to howl but for bitter tongues may only bite the sword that tames ...

(I think we all know why I shouldn't -- and won't -- do any personal messages this time around; it'd be neverending) In honesty, I cannot thank the community on ...

The new max is 3350 reviews. I dare anyone to even try to get that much. Snoink and I are racing for 5000. Thank you, Nate!

I'm in, Jabber... But wait, am I disqualified because I didn't fail the last one? D:

Kamas! So! You should be afraid, because I am pretty merciless at the moment. You know, pain does odd things to one self... I was considering doing a brutal amputation ...