Juniper

Hullo, Oza! June here, to review this for you. I really like how you wrote about a place that you went to. I like poems about experiences, because they give ...

Hullo there, Lyndzie! Welcome, welcome. I'm June, your critic for this poem, and do forgive if my say anything absurdly harsh. I mean it in the most genial way as ...

Hey Timmy, :) Again, my apologies for the weird question in chat, haha. I understand that came off far more random than I intended. Let's take a look at this, ...

Hey, Ruby! This isn't bad. I cannot critique much in the waywards of style and all, but you grasped narrative well in this and versed in in archaic language fluently. ...

Hallo, Fixed! I didn't know you did poetry! It's certainly good to see that. I do think this poem is fairly decent -- there are some things I like of ...

she immobilized the world when she put it in her canvas; the washedout streets and the hopeless birds pinned to a cloudless sky above a lonely tree besides an isolated ...

Heroine, you should post more, honestly. Your work is so brilliant. I really love this photo -- the focus, clarity and exposure are all just wonderful. I think it might ...

June is Toast, and Toast thinks that Snoink's idea of evil swans is just a little bit out there (this may stem from the fact that June loves swans and ...

Hallo, Tiff! Been a while since I reviewed you! Good to see you writing again. Nonfiction is difficult to review, because I'm a pretty solid critic, and I'm not always ...

Fraaaaank, I haven't reviewed you in so long! I really need to keep a better eye out for your work, because it's always a spark of interest to read. Here ...

It depends on the storybook! Some storybooks change point of view from character to character, while others in third person are just continuous. More often than not, I see character ...

Hey Marz! You're an editor and critic? That's just fabulous-- have you done anything beyond peer-level in the avenues of either? I kind of want to request a critique from ...

I think whatever talent I may have originally had-- if I ever had any, I lost before I came to YWS, and frankly, I have no confidence in my writing, ...

Otaku, DayDreamer, this may sound like an odd compliment, but the two of you have, like, perfect face shapes. :P Dream, something about your face reminds me of Alexander Rybak ...

Hey Melvin, I reinforce Grif's point about this poem seeming detached. There's not enough in this to make us sympathize with the victims of all of this. I think that ...