Juniper

Hullo, Emmy! I have to say that I don't quite understand this poem. From my standing point, it sounds a bit as if someone is in strong denial, but in ...

Rachel! Hello! June here, let's see what we can do about this. :) This, for the most part, is pretty good because I can see the story coming along nicely ...

Long time, no see, talk, anything. You should be around more. Honestly. ;) Anyway, review time: > On Structure (I know, it's annoying of me, but structure is half the ...

Thank you all, so much for the wonderful feedback! Especially Jack; I can now revise this when I get around to it. At any rate, I think I should explain ...

Hey, Pepper! Beh, I had a detailed, perhaps rambly, perhaps 30% useless review writ out, and Mozilla got a little hungry and had a snack. Rudely so, too, and didn't ...

To walk round something, all you've gotta do is walk in a circle around it! [/immaturity]

Antimel, Some may argue with me, but I do believe you have crafted a wonderful poem here. It's very delicate, soft spoken in both words, structure, and even font size. ...

Aha! This is the poem you referred to! I must say, this is beautiful. Wonderful use of old English, excellent rhyme, adequately placed, too, as standard rhyme was more customary ...

Oh, dear. Hello! Goodness, this is one of the most original poems I've seen in a long time. I'm not quite sure what to make of it! It was really ...

Hey there! I'm going to backup Antimel here and say that I do agree with her on the fact that, yes, some of the ways that you construct your lines ...

Tiiiiimmmy, I hope that doesn't sound like a brain-craving zombie... I liked your other poem! So, naturally, I was quite delighted to find out that you had posted this, and ...

Hey, Antimel! Decent. > On structure, You're good. I would recommend removing capital letters at the beginning of lines, unless it's a proper noun, because you're putting emphasis where it's ...

Hey, there! I would say that this poem was decent. For me, there isn't too much in it that sticks out to me as a strong liking point, and for ...

Hey, Jenthura! Prose poetry? Fabulous. In the third line, when describing the fox's eyes, do you mean eyes, not a singular eye? Keep an eye on minor things like that, ...

Hey, Hawk! June here! Not too bad of a poem here. :) I'm going to go through a few stanzas of this, pointing out some things I liked, and didn't ...