Juniper

Hello! Welcome! I really enjoyed this! Much like the Snoinkosaur, repetitive poems do drill on me, and before this got bad, it got interesting, so I enjoyed it! I think ...

AET LINDING, YOU ARE THE BEST POET, EVERS. Pez (is that the plural form) are wonderful things; at first I didn't like them, because they tasted like they should have ...

Welcome, Sans! I really like your username. June here. :) This is fair. Good because it has potential, and not so incredible because it's hard to see where you're going. ...

Bonjour! I'm going to back up Snoinkarine on the suggestion of checking for spelling errors, dear. I would point them out, but I are lazybones this morning. Nonetheless, I think ...

Thajaro! I don't really like sonnets. One of my friends and I often write poems to share with each other, and when we get lazy, we write really silly, sappy, ...

Hey there, Herzing! The electric purple In his argyle veins Are like the blood He feeds me SO, brutality is welcome? Sweet. :twisted: Okay, so, the problem with this stanza ...

Hey Midnight, This was a pretty poem! I enjoyed the theme, and the images. I do feel that the images could be strengthened with more visual description. I think the ...

Hello! June here! I think you have a decent sketch for a poem here, but I don't understand some parts. For instance, on the look of it, why are the ...

Hey Shoaib! A decent poem, indeed. I think that the rhyme holds you back a little here, because instead of getting your message out, it seems as if you're trying ...

Hallo! To concur, the emotion is well displayed here. As a critic of stylistic devices and lesser things like that, I'd like to see this reworked a bit. It's fair ...

Hey there, This may not be too bad of a start, but I don't like it because it's short, lamenting-tone-ish, and at the end brings us to no positive resolution, ...

Bonjour, Leza! (Remember how I was telling Ahmed how I am a vicious dinosaur, especially when it comes to reviews? ... yeah, it's nothing personal. ;)) It's not too bad ...

Wonderful, wonderful, Hawkie. I agree with Angela on the suggestion that it would be wonderful if the rest of your poem imitated the two final lines of the first stanza. ...

(I'm a fan) I really enjoyed this! I like the vivid images you use here. They do wonders at bringing this poem to life. In the second line, you have ...

Angel! I love how every time I expect something from you, you exceed my expectations. :)This may be a touch cliche, but it's well written. So, naturally, I'm in love ...