Juniper

Hullo, Ben! June here! Now, I know this is not what I'm supposed to be reviewing, but I want to get all of my poetry reviews out of the way ...

Oh dear, haha. My first impression of this was, "Did Grin seriously just write a poem about him ?" The ending of this is pretty amusing, but I'm not so ...

Hey, I can't really say that I enjoy this one too much. It may have potential but theme of love alone is well too overused for me to appreciate anymore, ...

Hey there! This is not bad! I enjoy how short it is, but I'm not sure that the sand metaphor is as clear as it could be. Think of sand ...

Hullo, Navi, Welcome! June here. :) As mentioned, it's easy to see Whitman's influence on this piece, in terms of stylistic language. I'm afraid, though, that you haven't caught all ...

Kammieyaz, I really like reviewing your poetry. Something about it is oddly pleasing, and no, no, it's not the morbid interest in killing a piece of writing. Your problem here ...

Hello! June here! Okay! This is a good starting point -- you have all of your ideas laid out for yourself, and here's what you need to do. 1. Narrow ...

Hey there, I think that you should take the time to improve this poem, dear. While the description of the guitar here is adequate, you're basically just telling us what ...

Hey there, babygirl12, I'm not quite sure what to say here. To begin, I think that because the theme is a lot overused, I didn't find it very interesting. I ...

Hey Baha, Juni here, This is cute. I think you do nicely with rhyme here, and because this is a riddle, there's not much to criticize. Is this a lion, ...

Hello, there! Kyllorac mentions a lot, so I would highly recommend paying much attention to their review. I like the rush to this -- the longer sentences make the poem ...

Hey, Chevy! I enjoy this poem for the relaxed prose tone to it. I do agree with Jack, though, on the comment that this doesn't pick up until the later ...

Hey Vale! June here, It seems most things have been covered, so I shall do a quick bullet list. - Write & out. Numbers and symbols should be written out, ...

Lisa! How adorable! This is a wonderful poem, and I cannot really critique it, because it's just terribly adorable. I can see this on a hallmark card or something. ;) ...

Kat! I'm with Blink and Snoink here. I do agree that you did a well job with giving a common theme a read of interest, and really, you did do ...