Juniper

Sometimes poems that bluntly tell a story irk me, but this one interested me and kept me reading through. I dont enjoy pirates and seafaring adventures, but this I liked. ...

The poem is a good starting point, but the word "and" should never or rarely be used as a connecting word. The poem also doesn't give the reader much hint ...

I loved it! It didn't give quite the cheery feel that most spring poems do, but it gave an emotional feel! The first line of the poem didnt quite agree ...

This definitely is not written by a depressed person. Very cheerful and exciting. Brings to mind the 4th of July or New Years Eve (more so 7/4). Can't say that ...

INTERESTING! It kind of holds suspense, and pulls the reader in to find what comes next, and the reader (well, at least I) feel a slight twinge of disappointment when ...

I love your writing style, but haha, i disagree with your opinion of fireworks. I do agree about the pollution and the bad effects, but the visual effects awe me. ...

I love how you described the whale as a "mass", larger than you, but yet your companion. To me, it signifies respect and a trust for those larger than you ...

This almost brought tears to my me it signifies the early night that you are about to spend reveling in peace with those who bring joy to your heart. Please ...

There must be more to life than this: a winter wind and withered kiss upon these frozen, sun-parched lips; just orange peel and apple pips. I love this! I have ...

Hi! I'm June and I am new here. I actually created a new thread before I saw this one :D. Oops, maybe I shall look closer next time. Just got ...

[b]Hello there![b] My name is June (that's my pen-name) and I am new to this forum, so I would like to give an intro :). Everyone can call me June, ...