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Re: Through the pain {part 3}
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Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Bathroom Arrest
Wow, that was... amazing. I like it, well written, few things could be better, and somewhat vague point to it, but it is pretty good. The only thing I would ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Optical Art
Wow! I like it! it's rather interesting! I love the way the colors contrast with each other. Please PM me if you do more!
Jul 12, 2008 -
Re: A few pieces of mine
Mini Cooper: Crane I drew for my little sister: Concorde: (This wasn't fun) Rearing Thoroughbred: Gulf stream: Like I said, most of these were done in a grand total of ...
Jul 12, 2008 -
Re: Snow White- After the Poison Apple
This was hysterically funny! I love it when people add on or put a twist to fairy tales. This was so funny, because it kind of shows that Prince Charming ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: Chapter One - Please Don't Rest Tonight
Two thumbs up! I loved it! I love how you described the voices in her head, and the smell of Bastians shirt. The names brought a unique twist to the ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: Through the pain {part two}
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Jul 10, 2008 -
Re: A Lively Conversation Between Two Corpses (1)
As many people before me have said, i haven't found anything wrong with this piece. It was down right brilliant, although i found it somewhat too dead-ish for my taste ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: Leopard Lily
The dramatic setting of this story with the flower narrating gives an extra romantic touch to this story. The wolf and bird signify a different type of relationship, although i ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Element- Chapter 1
Well I think it has a lot of potential, there's just a bit of grammatical errors that I'll touch on :). Coden ambled over to the water hole settled beside ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Chapter Two
The emotion in this story is so strong, and you did brilliant on giving insight and realistic drama to the characters moods and the overall setting. I love the way ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Through the pain {part 1}
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Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Lord of the Flies
I hated this was too morbid and gross.
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Hello, I'm new here :)
Thank you all so much for the welcome :) and the birthday wishes. The biography I wrote was actually on my sisters (not that they're interesting!) and my 72 cats ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Think (chapter one)
WoW. I love it. I have no changes to suggest....awesome.
Jun 29, 2008