Juniper

43 minutes with a laptop touch pad?! That's amazing! Wonderfully done! I think this is perfect in all it's cartoon-like glory. It's really incredible. The shirt looks a little blank, ...

Stori! Been a while since I read something of yours! :) I like this poem alot! :) I usually don't like poems that rhyme, or poems that raise questions, but ...

Hello, Fatimah! I don't generally like the raising of questions in poetry, especially not hypothetical ones. I'd recommend eliminating them, because raising questions that we can't answer doesn't do m

Hi, Julia! Welcome to YWS! :) This poem is a good start. I enjoyed how you began in past tense action. I would've liked to see that sustained until the ...

Hey! I really like this photo! The focus and clarity of the dog is absolutely wonderful! He has adorable eyes! I agree with Janay; I think that the blurring of ...

Hey Fixed! Out of focus a bit, eh? ;) I like the second one -- the heatmap effect on the second kind of throws everything out of recognition. You have ...

Hey, Flower! I concur; I like the second one most, because it has emotion on the face. ;) You should shade your drawings! The sides of the face and the ...

Mo! This is really pretty -- very spring-ish. It makes me smile! Only thing, I wouldn't have put the vines over the words; I'd probably have intertwined it around the ...

Hey, Leza, I usually don't like anime/manga drawings, but this is cute! I love her facial expression, and I agree with Demsy; the camera does add a nice effect, even ...

Hey, Lava, This is good. I think it could be improved if you strengthen your lines and add shading; dark for the underside of the branch and the lower parts ...

Hey Kyll, The first wolf is far better than anything I could dream of attempting. The eyes are odd, though, and something about the muzzle strikes me as odd. The ...

Hey, Gen! Cuuute. I think you should strengthen her lines; right now, they're sketchy and a bit weak. Coloring would do wonders for this as well, especially if you digitally ...

Hallo! A decent picture, indeed. I think the angle's a little common, though, and I might appreciate this a little more if you take a more unique approach to it. ...

Hey Dradian! Hm, I like this piece in all of its sketchy-glory, but something about it needs to be refined. Maybe it's the heart -- I think strengthening some of ...

Impressssive! Next time, try not to draw on lined paper, because it detracts sooo much from your picture. It's well done, except, on the right, the shell-looking-thing looks a little ...